Dinesh Thangavel
63,John Street
Singapore 118795
97485624
abcd@gmail.com
Mr Steven Jack
Human Resource Manager
ABC Private Ltd.
36,Hedrick Street
Singapore 115798
16 September 2012
Dear Mr.Steven Jack
Sub: Application for Internship Position
I
am writing this letter to express my interest to join ABC Private Ltd. as an
intern. I am a year two NUS undergraduate specialising in Computer Engineering. I learnt from the industrial attachment fair
that ABC Private Ltd. is hiring interns and hence, I would like to apply for
the project Data Analysis process improvement for system level bring-up and
characterization.
I feel that I
have all the abilities that are needed for this project. My Programming skills are very
good as I was a part of the team that developed Hypermarket Inventory Control and
Monitoring System using C++ .Further, I was involved in another group project
where we had designed and implemented an Autonomous Line Tracking Vehicle using
hardware components. Further, my analytical skills have been recognised in some
Mathematical and Physics competition.
My education in
4 different schools at 4 different places have made me adaptable to any
situation .Thus, I am confident that I can overcome the challenge of working in
this project with engineers present in different geographical locations. Also, my experience of working in teams in co-curricular
activities by organising meetings and adhering to deadlines has improved my
leadership and time-management skills.
My resume has
been enclosed for your evaluation. Thank You very much for your time and
consideration. If you have any further questions, I would be glad to furnish
you with more information in an interview. Please do not hesitate to contact me at the number
provided in my enclosed resume.
Thank you
Yours sincerely
Dinesh Thangavel
Hi,Dinesh.
ReplyDeleteYour application letter is really concise and clear, which is sometimes a advantage for applying a internship when there are hundreds of similar letters mailed into the company on one day.
You has a nice and standard structure which closely follows the standard format.In the second paragraph,you list several projects that you have done. To be honest, although I has done the same projects as you, I did not notice their names. The projects names you used in your letter sound quite professional, which is a good point I think I may learn something from.You also have another third paragraph stating your adaptability, I think it is nice,too. It shows your potential to adapt the company environment well and this will increase your opportunity to get the internship.
Good luck for your future application for this!
Hi Dinesh.
ReplyDeleteYour application is short and concise,which is good.In fact I finish reading it in one minute.which is a good thing because the officer only have 30 to 40 seconds for each application letter right?= =~
you introduced your soft skill and professionalism in two different paragraphs.I think it makes your whole letter very well structured.Plus your clear opening and polite closing, overall the structure is clear.
Just one suggestion, I think you can include more job related information and supporting detail, to show that you tailor your letter to this job.Maybe you have already done that? But I cannot see because I do not understand what Data Analysis process improvement for system level bring-up and characterization is.
Cheers man.
Good luck to your future application!